Eden’s Enigma

beta reading

Hi everyone!!! Thank you so much for agreeing to do a beta read for me.

Your input is vital to the improvement of my writing, therefore producing better novels for you and the public to enjoy!

If you were one of the ARC readers for Eden’s Deliverance, you probably know that what you read ahead of release is almost identical to what ended up being published.

I never really understood why other authors needed to make multiple drafts to get to the end of their novels, but I’ve decided to take a different approach with this sequel.

Instead of changing a few things here and there as I go through the editing process, I will be side-by-side rewriting the entire novel into a second draft…making changes based on things I see and comments you guys suggest as well.

This means you guys are LITERALLY helping me to rewrite this manuscript and taking part in the construction of this story.

Click Here to access the novel’s Google Doc.

Please feel free to:

-highlight your favorite lines of dialogue/monologue/etc so I have good suggestions for marketing…and also to just know what readers enjoy the most!

-highlight any typos, punctuation mistakes/changes, or words you think could be changed

-make notes on scenes that you think need more or less descriptions/info

Basically, annotate the hell out of it, however you see fit!

Without one special ARC reader (you know who you are), the entire Halloween chapter wouldn’t have been added to Eden’s Deliverance. So please, suggest some fun scene ideas, songs, whatever you think could make the book better!

In addition to notes on the manuscript, Click Here to access the Beta Reader Questionnaire.

Please keep these questions in mind as you read, and fill out as necessary.

The best way to do this would be to make a ‘note’ on each question by highlighting it, and I’ll be able to keep track of everyone’s comments.